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Step Two - Selecting an Essay Topic
Having completed step one, you should now have a rough idea
of the elements you wish to include in your essay, including
your goals, important life experiences, research experience,
diversifying features, spectacular nonacademic accomplishments,
etc. You should also now have an idea of what impression you
want to make on the admissions officers. We should remark that
at this stage, undergraduate applicants have a large advantage
over graduate school applicants. Whereas nobody questions a
high school student's motivation to attend college, graduate
and professional school applicants must directly address in
their essays their desire to study their selected field.
You must now confront the underlying problem of the admissions
essay. You must now consider topics that will allow you to synthesize
your important personal characteristics and experiences into
a coherent whole while simultaneously addressing your desire
to attend a specific institution. While most admissions essays
allow great latitude in topic selection, you must also be sure
to answer the questions that were asked of you. Leaving a lasting
impression on someone who reads 50-100 essays a day will not
be easy, but we have compiled some guidelines to help you get
started. With any luck, one or two topics, with small changes,
will allow you to answer application questions for 5-7 different
colleges, although admissions officers do appreciate essays
that provide convincing evidence of how an applicant will fit
into a particular academic environment. You should at least
have read the college's webpage, admissions catalog, and have
an understanding of the institution's strengths.
Consider the following questions before proceeding:
- Have you selected a topic that describes something of personal
importance in your life, with which you can use vivid personal
experiences as supporting details?
- Is your topic a gimmick? That is, do you plan to write your
essay in iambic pentameter or make it funny. You should be
very, very careful if you are planning to do this. We recommend
strongly that you do not do this. Almost always, this is done
poorly and is not appreciated by the admissions committee.
Nothing is worse than not laughing or not being amused at
something that was written to be funny or amusing.
- Will your topic only repeat information listed elsewhere
on your application? If so, pick a new topic. Dont mention
GPAs or standardized test scores in your essay.
- Can you offer vivid supporting paragraphs to your essay
topic? If you cannot easily think of supporting paragraphs
with concrete examples, you should probably choose a different
essay topic.
* Can you fully answer the question asked of you? Can you
address and elaborate on all points within the specified word
limit, or will you end up writing a poor summary of something
that might be interesting as a report or research paper? If
you plan on writing something technical for college admissions,
make sure you truly can back up your interest in a topic and
are not merely throwing around big scientific words. Unless
you convince the reader that you actually have the life experiences
to back up your interest in neurobiology, the reader will
assume you are trying to impress him/her with shallow tactics.
Also, be sure you can write to admissions officers and that
you are not writing over their heads.
- Can you keep the reader's interest from the first word.
The entire essay must be interesting, considering admissions
officers will probably only spend a few minutes reading each
essay.
- Is your topic overdone? To ascertain this, peruse through
old essays. EssayEdge's 100 free essays can help you do this.
However, most topics are overdone, and this is not a bad thing.
A unique or convincing answer to a classic topic can pay off
big.
- Will your topic turnoff a large number of people? If you
write on how everyone should worship your God, how wrong or
right abortion is, or how you think the Republican or Democratic
Party is evil, you will not get into the college of your choice.
The only thing worse than not writing a memorable essay is
writing an essay that will be remembered negatively. Stay
away from specific religions, political doctrines, or controversial
opinions. You can still write an essay about Nietzsche's influence
on your life, but express understanding that not all intelligent
people will agree with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize instead
Nietzsche's influence on your life, and not why you think
he was wrong or right in his claims.
- In this vein, if you are presenting a topic that is controversial,
you must acknowledge counter arguments without sounding arrogant.
- Will an admissions officer remember your topic after a day
of reading hundreds of essays? What will the officer remember
about your topic? What will the officer remember about you?
What will your lasting impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with the above criteria and
asking for the free opinions of EssayEdge editors, of your teachers
or colleagues, and of your friends, you should have at least 1-2
interesting essay topics. Consider the following guidelines below.
1. If you are planning on writing an essay on how you survived
poverty in Russia, your mother's suicide, your father's kidnapping,
or your immigration to America from Asia, you should be careful
that your main goal is to address your own personal qualities.
Just because something sad or horrible has happened to you does
not mean that you will be a good college or graduate school student.
You don't want to be remembered as the pathetic applicant. You
want to be remembered as the applicant who showed impressive qualities
under difficult circumstances. It is for this reason that essays
relating to this topic are considered among the best. Unless you
only use the horrible experience as a lens with which to magnify
your own personal characteristics, you will not write a good essay.
Graduate and professional school applicants should generally steer
clear of this topic altogether unless you can argue that your
experience will make you a better businessman, doctor, lawyer,
or scholar.
2. Essays should fit in well with the rest of a candidate's
application, explaining the unexplained and steering clear of
that which is already obvious. For example, if you have a 4.0
GPA and a 1500 SAT, no one doubts your ability to do the academic
work and addressing this topic would be ridiculous. However, if
you have an 850 SAT and a 3.9 GPA or a 1450 SAT and a 2.5 GPA,
you would be wise to incorporate in your essay an explanation
for the apparent contradiction. For example, perhaps you were
hospitalized or family concerns prevented your dedication to academics;
you would want to mention this in your essay. However, do not
make your essay one giant excuse. Simply give a quick, convincing
explanation within the framework of your larger essay.
3. "Diversity" is the biggest buzzword of the
1990's. Every college, professional school, or graduate school
wants to increase diversity. For this reason, so many applicants
are tempted to declare what makes them diverse. However, simply
saying you are a black, lesbian female will not impress admissions
officers in the least. While an essay incorporating this information
would probably be your best topic idea, you must finesse the issue
by addressing your own personal qualities and how you overcame
stigma, dealt with social ostracism, etc. If you are a rich student
from Beverly Hills whose father is an engineer and whose mother
is a lawyer, but you happen to be a minority, an essay about how
you dealt with adversity would be unwise. You must demonstrate
vividly your personal qualities, interests, motivations, etc.
Address specifically how your diversity will contribute to the
realm of campus opinion, the academic environment, and social
life.
4. Don't mention weaknesses unless you absolutely need
to explain them away. You want to make a positive first impression,
and telling an admissions officer anything about drinking, drugs,
partying, etc. undermines your goal. EssayEdge editors have read
more essays on ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) than we would
ever have imagined. Why admit to weakness when you can instead
showcase your strengths?
5. Be honest, but not for honesty's sake. Unless you are
a truly excellent writer, your best, most passionate writing will
be about events that actually occurred. While you might be tempted
to invent hardship, it is completely unnecessary. Write an essay
about your life that demonstrates your personality.
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